Book 3 of the Spiral War Saga, Rising Warriors, Rising Threat is now with the beta readers. Once I have their input I will make any necessary changes and upon receipt of the final cover art will submit the book to Kindle Scout. From there I will have 30 days to get the requisite votes to have Amazon accept the book for publication, distribution, and most importantly, promotion. When, that happens I'll be calling on all my loyal readers to help vote.
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Tuesday, October 6, 2015
The Martian Movie Review
Go see this movie. No, seriously, grab a friend, or two, or more, and go see this movie. 5 Stars. Then come back here and read the review.
Did you go see the movie?
What do you mean no?
Need more of a reason, here's the trailer:
Grab your keys and your wallet, or someone with keys and wallet and go see this movie, now.
Did you see the movie yet?
Well whether you have or not, spoilers ahead. Quite simply put, this is the best movie I've seen this year. Anyone who knows me knows that I hate it when movies deviate too far from the source materials, especially when it's a book. I hated movies like I-Robot, Starship Troopers, I Am Legend, etc... for doing just that. On the flip side I have praise the Lord of the Rings and Harry Potter movies.
This movie, while taking certain liberties from the book, stuck to it fairly well. I understand why it it deviated too, most of the time it was to move the story along at a faster pace. While there were some scenes I would have liked to have seen, losing them didn't upset me. Even the additions didn't get my blood boiling. Yes, there were a couple that were there for the ego of the stars, but they were ok and I could pass them off. Even the extended ending, compared to the book, worked well in my opinion, it offered more closure.
I could sit down here for hours and dissect every scene of the film, but I won't. It it simply a great film. It is smart, it is funny, it is well paced, and it is believable. They didn't turn any of the characters into mustache twirling villains, and on some level you could relate to almost everyone in it.
This was a story about people coming together to save a single brave hero. And, it worked. It worked so well. I hope that Andy Weir gets a dump truck full of royalties for this movie.
And for those of you haven't read the book.
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BUY THIS BOOK!!! |
5 Stars, well earned by all involved. Now go see the movie if you haven' yet.
Thursday, July 30, 2015
Book Review: The Forgotten Prince (Second Star Book 2), By Josh Hayes
I will admit that I have not yet read book 1 of the series, Breaking Through, but I will rectify that soon.
That being said I was not lost at all as I started reading this book. Many a new author when writing a series will not write the second book assuming the reader has finished the first book. This is always a mistake, and one that Josh Hayes has avoided. I was in the action from the first word and didn't feel like I had to play catch up at all. The characters were reintroduced well and we were off on an adventure in Neverland.
But this isn't the same Neverland you grew up with, and the main character, John McNeal, is well aware of that, commenting on that several times in the book. It is nice to see a character who is genre savvy in that way. John finds himself in the middle of a civil war between the Regency, led by the Infamous Captain Hook and his second in command Commander Peter Pantiri, and the rebellious Lost Boys led by Wendy herself.
As the book progresses it becomes more obvious that it is the middle part of the story, and as the author explains at the end of the book, he has plotted out a four book series. The ending left me wanting more and caring about what happened next to the characters. The book also left some questions unanswered, foreshadowing some things that will, hopefully, happen in the rest of the series. Book 2 of a series is always a good place to do this kind of thing.
I was never a huge fan of Peter Pan growing up, the tale of a little boy who never grew up and never matured just didn't work for me. I think having seen the Disney version first hurt my impression of the book. Though I did love the short lived Fox series Peter Pan and the Pirates.
| Peter in ripped up rags just looks so much more fleshed out then in tights, plus hook doesn't look like a joke. |
I would recommend this book to anyone who wants to read a fun, genre defying book, with some fun characters and a world that gets more fleshed out with every page. I am definitely looking forward to the next two books in the series and plan to go back and read the opening novella as well now to see what I missed.
Book Shield Rating: 91% (some minor editting glitches crept through, but nothing that I wouldn't see coming out of a major house as well as an indie publication.)
The Forgotten Prince
- File Size: 2005 KB
- Print Length: 155 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publication Date: August 14, 2015
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B0115790HU
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- X-Ray: Not Enabled
- Word Wise: Not Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
Friday, April 17, 2015
The Agony of Formatting and E-Book Conversion (A Tutorial)
Zero Cost E-Book Formatting and Conversion Tutorial
So you've written your book, edited it, and have decided to go indie on the publication, casting off the shackles of the "traditional" publishing houses. But how do you ready your novel for publication without going to outside assistance? You can always go out and pay someone to take your individual files, clean them up and convert them, or buy the software to do so, which can range from $40-$160 or more. Well if you're willing to put in a little work and/or are on a tight budget, then consider this method.
I originally attempted this method as outlined on wikihow:
Convert-a-Word-Document-to-Epub
It's a good method, but somewhat incomplete and can result in some buggy output.
In my case the conversion of my book resulted in several thousand html based errors and convinced me to pay for the conversion, which I was never satisfied with. Onto the actual tutorial.
Resources:
Word Processor (MS Word, Open Office, Libre Office, etc...)
Google Docs
Calibre E-Book Manager
An Epub Validator (There are many of these out there, but this one is free and was recommended by my original distributor)
Your Novel.
Part 1: Formatting and Cleanup.
Step 1:
Using your preferred Word Processor open up your novel, be it all one file or multiple. At this point you may not have done any formatting to the story itself so it will look like the default plain text. If you have already added a chapter title, then you are already a step in the right direction.Step 2:
Highlight your main title, select "Format > Styles and Formatting" or the equivalent option for changing a "style" in your word processor, then select from the list of style options: "Heading 1" as shown here:Step 3:
Repeat this process for every chapter, this is how you will assemble your table of contents later.
Step 4:
This is the step that will take up the most of your time, so settle in for several operator hours, but first meet your new best friend, the Pilcrow ¶. Click the Pilcrow ¶ symbol (1)in your word processor and you should be immediately be presented with a view like the one below. A properly formatted document will have nothing on the page except for the actual text and Pilcrows at the end of a paragraph. Any additional spaces at the end of a paragraph (2), additional tabs (3), or carriage returns (4), should be eliminated. Take your time here, as cleaning up these little errors will have a big impact later after you convert your document, so best to do it now.
Part 2: Compiling.
Step 5:
Most word processors, MS Word in particular, have a bad habit of sneaking formatting into a document that you cannot readily see. This formatting will bite you hard when you convert to an e-book format. It was suggested by fellow author Bill Frisbee that a way to clean this up would be to first copy and paste the manuscript into google docs.
To that end, pull up google docs on your favorite web browser and paste the text from your novel into it. Note, it is important to actually cut and paste it in, do not import the document. I further recommend that this where you composite the whole document together. To do this, after you paste in a chapter, go to the bottom and insert page break.
Repeat for every chapter.
Step 6:
Now that you've compiled/assembled your novel in google docs you need to export it. There are several formats you can download it as, .docx, .odt, .rtf, .pdf, .txt, and .html. I recommend exporting for submissions into .docx as most publishers prefer this format. For e-book conversion though download it as an .rtf. Now don't be shocked to see that the rtf file will be several MB in size.
Part 3: Conversion.
Step 7:
Now open up calibre (this is free software). You will be presented with a screen like this one.
Step 8:
Click on the "Add Books" Icon in the upper right hand corner and select the rtf version of your novel.
Step 9:
Now click on the "Edit Metadata" Icon and enter in the pertinent data about your novel.
Step 10:
Click "OK" to exit back to the main screen and then "Convert books" Icon. The "Convert books" window will pop up. In the upper right corner of this screen find the "Output format" menu, select MOBI or EPUB. You can't do both at once, but you can do one then come back and do the other. I recommend EPUB first as it can be tested with ease.Step 11:
The left side menu has several items, but you'll only need "Look and Feel" and "Table of Contents."Step 12:
Under "Look and Feel" check the "Remove spacing between paragraphs" box.
Step 13:
Under "Table of Contents" select the wizard button to the right of "Level 1 TOC (XPath expression). This is where your formatting comes in handy.
Step 14:
From the drop down menu labeled "Match HTML tags with tag name:" in the new window that pops up select "h1" and click "OK."Step 15:
You should now see "//h:h1" listed in the Level 1 TOC field.Step 16:
Click "OK" and Calibre will begin converting. Conversion can take a few minutes, so be patient. If you converted to MOBI the first time, then hit the "Convert books" button again and select EPUB to convert to that format. Then you'll want to hit the big "Save to disk" button.What you're saving is actually a directory (author's name) with a set of files (all their works.) Because off this, you'll want to save all your Calibre conversions into a super-directory called "authors" or some such. If you enlarge the picture above you'll see the location is:
Documents > My Documents > My eBooks > Authors
This is where you want to be, with the "Folder" field at the bottom of the windowblank when you press the "Select Directory" button. What happens is that Calibre will search this directory for the author's name and either save to that author's directory if it's already been created, or create it if it's not yet there.
Part 4: Testing.
Step 17:
Now navigate over to your epub validator and upload your newly created epub.
If you've done everything right then the system will return zero errors. Most errors will appear as html errors though.
Yes, I cribbed most of this tutorial from the wikihow article, but there are some changes and additional steps that had I known them at the time would have saved me quite a bit of time, money and embarrassment.
Monday, February 23, 2015
Book Reviews Hugh B. Long's Tribes of Yggdrasil (First Trilogy)
Book Reviews
This is my first time reviewing works outside of a writing group format. I did not want to post anything that would count as spoilers, but given that I am reviewing a trilogy here all at once, that was tricky to do. Hopefully my reviewing style will improve as I go along, but in short, I highly recommend these fun Space Opera novels and eagerly await Hugh B. Long's follow ons.
Hugh B. Long is a fellow independent author of Space Opera and Fantasy with a decidedly Nordic flavor.
The Tribes of Yggdrasil is Long's ongoing Space Opera taking place in a universe where the Norse Gods were real, or at least very ancient and powerful aliens. This adds an interesting flavor to the story arcs as most "Ancient Alien" sci-fi focuses more on African cultures, and especially on the Egyptians. The First Trilogy focuses primarily on Haldor Olsen and his crew as they battle against the Hrymar threat encroaching on the expanding human empire.
Book 0 The Yggdrasil Codex
First released in May 2012 is a 15 page short story that serves as a prologue to The Tribes of Yggdrasil Trilogy. The book follows two young up and coming scientists, one an expert in Runology, and the other Astronomy, as they make a startling discovery about an ancient Norse Runestone. The discovery has vast implications for all of mankind as it proves, once and for all, that we are not alone, and that ancient aliens have taken an interest in us before.The story may sound a little familiar, and at first I thought so as well. But it is handled in a way that most stories like this don't do. Instead of the rune stone containing some mystical device that transports humanity across the stars after deciphering what amounts to little more than a child't riddle, it contains instructions for further communications and requires the most advanced computers on the planet to unlock all of it's secrets.
I did enjoy the possibly unintentional nod to HP Lovecraft in that it was the coming together of two different specialists in vastly different fields that pointed to the rune stone being more than just an archaeological curiosity.
Overall this was an enjoyable read and sets the tone well for the rest of the series, grounding the story in hard science and a mythology not often seen in speculative fiction.
Book 1 Star Wolves
Released in December 2012, Star Wolves takes place approximately 100 years after the events in The Yggdrasil Codex. It follows the exploits of Haldor Olsen, Hal, the descendant of the runeologist who decoded the rune stone and helped humanity make first contact with its cousin race, the Alfar. Much has changed in the intervening 100 years, the world has come under the common rule of the Solar Inclusive Democracy, (SID) a true democracy where everyone has an equal vote. Humanity has also expanded beyond Earth, throughout the solar system and beyond, establishing the first extrasolar colony of New Midgard. Ancient religions have risen to new prominence, with the old "pagan" religions all but replacing Judo-Christianity for many people.
Haldor serves in the SID's explorer fleet, charting new planets and finding those that might make acceptable colony sites. After returning home to his wife and son on New Midgard he is told of a planet with another rune stone on it and is sent to the Alfar homeworld to charter a mission to investigate. The six month mission reveals that certain runestones allow access to a vast "interstellar bridge network" allowing ships to travel much faster than they can in hyperspace.
While Hal is away however the Hrymar, another cousin race to humanity, attack New Midgard, kidnapping most of the populace to use as slaves before destroying the colony. This action forces the SID and the Alfar to have to deal with the Hrymar, and they commission Hal and his new crew to chase them down in his new ship, the Sleipnir, a new class of Stealth Corvette.
This book again is very enjoyable read. The science in it tends to be solid and consistent. FTL communication can only occur between planets of sufficient mass and that have a specialized piece of equipment that uses quantum entanglement. The use of FTL ships, a trope of Space Opera, is well handled with hyperspace, but tends towards the Trek or Star Wars model, where ships can enter and exit hyperspace at will. Combat is executed exclusively in normal space and is well done, with battles taking place once ships are within a few light seconds of each other, and chases taking hours to accomplish because of the vast distances.
Hal serves as an interesting main character and a good windows into this universe as he make discoveries, endures losses, and triumphs through victories. The personal and personnel challenges he faces are all too familiar and feel real. His interactions with Devrim, the son of the Hrymar Over-Chieftain are well handled and interesting.
My biggest nit with the book is that most of the races tend towards human cousins. They are very similar to humans, varying only by height, build and skin coloration. More diverse races show up towards the end of the book, but with exception of Humans and Alfar most tend to be limited in their cultural depth.
Shield Rating 93%
*** Warning Spoilers Ahead ***
Book 2 Star Fury
The Solar Inclusive Democracy (SID) hangs by a thread after the devastating Hrymar attack on Earth. Millions are dead and the rest are reeling with backroom politicking threatening to tear the government apart. Things are no better for Haldor Olsen, Hal, captain of the Sleipnir, as he tries to recover from not only the loss of his family but the betrayal from one of his oldest friends. Hal doesn't sit idle though, and after receiving an urgent mission from the SID president races off to chase down Earth's richest man. This man betrayed the Earth to the Hrymar, selling them secrets and technology in exchange for subjects to conduct horrific experiments on so that he might extend his own life. Meanwhile, Devrim, the new leader of the Hrymar begins his own quest to make his people a true superpower, consolidating their leadership and begins to turn a young human slave boy towards the Hrymar way.
Released June 2014, Star Fury is an excellent follow up to Star Wolves. It does everything a good sequel should, it expands the universe, telling a larger story that ups the ante for everyone. The book delves into the dark side of the otherwise Utopian SID, showing that no matter how noble the goals, human greed will not be so easily overcome.
The expansion of the universe is great, with new places and non-human races introduced as well as new characters. I particularly enjoyed this aspect of the book as well as Hal's wrestling with the loss of his family while trying to serve a changing government that no longer stands for what it once did.
I quite enjoyed the way that Long developed the Hrymar in this book, using the human slave to illustrate many parts of their culture. We really feel the terror the child endures as he is forced to live amongst Hrymar children. I just feel that his eventual transformation needed one more scene to really clinch it in my own mind.
I really want to see more of these diverse aliens as the series progresses, especially the mysterious blues. I hope they will play a much larger role as the series progresses.
Shield Rating 96%
Book 3 Star Viking
Released December 2014, Star Viking takes place ten years after the events of the previous two books. Haldor "Hal" Olsen has broken away from the SID and the Alfar to form his own feudal government. His major goal, to end the Hrymar threat. For nine years he succeeds in doing just that, pushing the Hrymar back before Devrim, the Hyrmar Over Chieftain deploys his new line of ships that begin to decimate every colony they come across. To complicate matters more the lead ship of the fleet is commanded by one of the fiercest Hrymar ever, and his protoge' Hal Olsen's own son.
I like the progression here in the books. Hal has risen to a role of supreme leadership over his people, bringing in recruits from a variety of races to battle against the Hrymar. The Technology has grown as well, developing from the seeds planted in the early books. The immobility of command even begins to come into play as Hal is forced to watch others fight on his behalf, something he would much rather do himself. When he does leave his ship to lead the troops, it is something that his crew fights against, a good touch.
As a character Hal grows a great deal in this book, his relationship with a freed slave girl opens up doors he thought long closed as he takes her as his own daughter and in the process discovers and awakening power within both of them and my favorite character, his alien Dire Wold Venn. His personal relationships also continue to flourish, but face road blocks when he learns that his son is not only alive, but wants him dead, and leaves him questioning whether his wife might also still be alive.
Long continues to plant seeds in this book of things to come. Betrayals by certain characters are explained, but others left to hang enticing the reader to find out what will happen next. Long is building up to some massive, galaxy shattering events in these books with new players coming on the scene and preparing to move in for the kill.
Shield Rating 94%
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